honestly, this does deserve a ten
not as a ten spam and not for the helluvit, but this truly deserves a ten. it's catchy beyond all logic, it's decidedly hilarious the first time, but endearingly clever any time after that. weebl songs are inherantly fun, but this has a little more spark than just a random topic to sing about (though waffles are up there too). just a good, smooth, playful song with great animation.
that was brilliant, from the style to the content. even the penus joke was har-larious.
among other verbs!
high in the sky
the part at 1:40 really sells this, and just a bit later with the instruments filling some necessary space, it all comes together quite nicely. if i were to come up with a complaint of any kind, i'd say the first bit is a little thinner than i'd prefer, but that's more the style of percussion (and the bass-like instrument might be a little quiet in the distorted resonance part), but i didn't write this - you did. and i can respect that. great work and awesome job. the whole thing really works well.
take it from here...
...and you'll have something pretty sweet in the making. 6, because there's potential, but there's not a whole lot to go on, yet (i don't trust "drafts" to do well if people aren't willing to foresee anything). what an obscure source idea. be sure to delete/obliterate this version when/if you make a completed one. the scores would be adverse.
maybe TOO thick. and i understand your thoughts. it's like "i don't really LOVE it, but it's not that BAD, but i don't really care if it's on there, but it IS already on the internet..."
still, it doesn't suck. the sounds and everything are great, but they're harsh altogether. maybe give some things some separation and it'd be awesome enough to admire graciously.
Thanks, for the compliments and the criticism.
I've learned more recently to watch my volume and peak meters, so i'll try and master or just adjust volume and frequency levels until i've got a better sound happening.
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